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Hollowed One - Chapter 6: The Old Man

Hollowed One - Chapter 6: The Old Man

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  • May 23, 2026
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The Old Man


Some stories survive because someone remembers them.

Part I — Eli Redwater

Sheriff Daniel Mercer first heard the name Eli Redwater two days after Deputy Wells disappeared.

The suggestion came quietly.

Reluctantly.

Like speaking the name itself carried risk.

Mercer sat inside the overcrowded sheriff’s department command room while exhausted deputies pinned new missing persons reports across wall maps of Blackwater County. Coffee cups littered tables beside crime scene photos no one wanted to study anymore.

The Hollow One continued hunting every night.

Three more disappearances.

Two bodies recovered.

Neither remotely human afterward.

Mercer rubbed tired eyes while listening to another terrified 911 recording involving voices whispering from tree lines outside town.

Then Melissa Vane closed the recorder.

“You need to talk to Eli.”

The sheriff looked up slowly.

“Who?”

“The old tribal medicine man.”

Deputy Collins scoffed immediately.

“We’re calling shamans now?”

Melissa ignored him.

“He lives near Black Cedar Ridge.”

Mercer leaned back carefully.

“The tribal elders already refused to help.”

“They refused to talk,” Melissa corrected quietly. “That’s different.”

The coroner looked exhausted.

Too many autopsies.

Too many impossible injuries.

Too little sleep.

“I grew up around these people,” she continued softly. “When something old scares them, they go to Eli.”

Mercer frowned.

“You believe in this folklore stuff?”

Melissa hesitated.

Then glanced toward photographs pinned across the room.

Bodies folded backward.

Skin inverted.

Symbols carved into flesh.

Finally she whispered:

“I believe none of this should exist.”

Silence settled heavily afterward.

Nobody argued.

Because skepticism had become harder every day.

Mercer eventually stood.

“Where do I find him?”

Black Cedar Ridge rested twenty miles north of town beyond winding dirt roads swallowed by pine forests and swamp water.

Mercer drove alone.

Rain drifted lightly across his windshield while radio static crackled constantly through patrol frequencies. The deeper he traveled into tribal land, the quieter the woods became.

Not completely silent.

Not yet.

But wrong somehow.

The sheriff finally spotted the cabin near dusk.

Small.

Weathered.

Hidden beside a narrow creek beneath enormous cypress trees draped in hanging moss.

Smoke drifted from a rusted chimney.

Dreamcatchers and carved bone charms hung from the porch roof, moving gently in humid wind.

Mercer stepped from the SUV slowly.

The silence here felt different from Black Pine Creek.

Not dead.

Watching.

The cabin door opened before he reached it.

An old man stood there silently.

Eli Redwater looked older than the trees surrounding the cabin.

Long gray hair tied behind his shoulders.

Deep lines carved across dark weathered skin.

His eyes remained sharp despite age.

Intelligent.

Tired.

And burdened.

Mercer removed his hat respectfully.

“You Eli Redwater?”

The old man studied him quietly for several seconds.

“You waited too long to come.”

Mercer felt immediate unease.

“You know why I’m here?”

Eli looked toward the distant woods.

“I knew before you parked.”

The sheriff glanced around instinctively.

No movement nearby.

Only drifting fog through pines.

“You’ve heard about the killings?”

Eli finally looked back at him.

“I heard the forest go silent.”

Mercer swallowed slowly.

The old man stepped aside.

“Come inside before dark.”

The cabin interior smelled of cedar smoke and old leather.

Bundles of drying herbs hung from ceiling beams beside faded tribal carvings and shelves filled with ancient books. Animal bones rested carefully along windowsills beside jars containing black stones etched with symbols Mercer recognized instantly.

Binding symbols.

The same carvings found near every crime scene.

Mercer noticed photographs lining one wall.

Generations of tribal families.

Hunters.

Warriors.

Medicine men.

Each image carried the same haunted eyes.

Eli poured coffee silently before sitting beside the fireplace.

“You brought the recording.”

Not a question.

Mercer stiffened slightly.

“How did you know that?”

The old man stared into the fire.

“Because that’s how it began last time.”

Cold settled quietly into Mercer’s chest.

“What exactly began?”

Eli finally met his eyes.

For the first time since entering the cabin, Mercer saw genuine fear there.

Not superstition.

Not confusion.

Recognition.

The old man knew exactly what hunted those woods.

And he had feared its return his entire life.

Mercer slowly removed the evidence bag containing the cassette tape from his coat.

Eli’s expression darkened immediately.

His hands tightened visibly around the coffee mug.

“The sleeping song,” he whispered.

The cabin suddenly felt colder.

Outside, wind moved softly through surrounding pines.

Mercer leaned forward carefully.

“I need answers.”

Eli stared at the tape for several long seconds before speaking again.

“No,” he said quietly. “You need prayers.”

The sheriff felt frustration rise.

“People are dying.”

“Yes.”

“Then help me stop it.”

Eli looked exhausted suddenly.

Like a man watching history repeat itself exactly as feared.

“You cannot stop something you do not understand.”

Mercer slid the cassette player onto the table beside the tape.

“That’s why I’m here.”

The old man closed his eyes briefly.

Somewhere outside, distant branches cracked softly in the woods.

Eli heard it too.

Mercer noticed immediately.

The medicine man’s face tightened almost imperceptibly.

“He’s already closer than before,” Eli whispered.

Mercer’s pulse slowed.

“He?”

Eli opened his eyes again.

And quietly answered:

“The Hollow One.”

The cabin fire snapped loudly between them.

Outside, the forest slowly began falling silent again.

Part II — The Recording

Rain tapped softly against Eli Redwater’s cabin windows while the old medicine man stared silently at the cassette tape resting on the wooden table between them.

Neither man spoke for nearly a full minute.

The fire crackled softly nearby.

Mercer watched Eli carefully.

The old man looked less afraid now than resigned.

Like someone confronting an old wound reopening after decades buried beneath scar tissue.

Finally Eli reached toward the tape player slowly.

His hands trembled slightly.

“You should not have brought this here.”

Mercer frowned.

“It’s evidence.”

“No,” Eli whispered. “It’s a door.”

The sheriff remained silent.

Because deep down he already feared that might be true.

Eli inserted the tape carefully into the old player.

The cabin seemed to darken subtly the moment the cassette clicked into place.

Outside, wind faded.

The woods beyond the cabin grew still.

Mercer noticed immediately.

So did Eli.

The old man closed his eyes briefly before pressing PLAY.

Static hissed softly through the speaker.

Then the singing began.

Low tribal voices drifted through ancient distortion while drums pulsed faintly beneath warped melody. The sound felt wrong instantly inside the small cabin.

Older than language.

Older than memory.

Mercer studied Eli’s reaction carefully.

The medicine man never moved.

Never blinked.

He sat perfectly still listening while firelight flickered across his weathered face.

The song rose and fell unnaturally through the speaker.

Sorrow.

Warning.

Fear.

Mercer suddenly realized something horrifying.

Eli understood every word.

The old man’s lips moved silently alongside parts of the chant.

Not singing.

Remembering.

The sheriff leaned forward slightly.

“What language is that?”

Eli ignored him completely.

The medicine man listened with absolute concentration while the distorted voices echoed through the cabin walls.

Then came the breathing beneath the recording.

Deep.

Heavy.

Ancient.

Mercer felt cold crawl slowly across his arms.

Eli’s eyes opened instantly.

For the first time since the tape began playing, emotion crossed his face.

Recognition.

The breathing continued beneath the song like something enormous standing just beyond hearing range.

Mercer suddenly noticed the fire dimming unnaturally.

The flames lowered despite untouched logs.

Shadows thickened around the corners of the cabin.

Then the scream emerged from the recording.

Raw human terror buried beneath static.

Mercer flinched instinctively.

Eli didn’t.

The old man sat frozen while the scream echoed through the cabin.

Then the whispering began.

Soft voices hidden beneath the static itself.

Mercer leaned closer.

“Do you hear that?”

Eli nodded slowly.

“They’re trapped inside it.”

The sheriff stared at him.

“What?”

But Eli still didn’t answer.

The song continued building toward its warped climax while the medicine man’s expression gradually changed from concentration into visible dread.

Outside, the woods had gone completely silent now.

Mercer realized he no longer heard rain.

No frogs.

No insects.

Nothing.

Only the recording.

And somewhere beneath the music—

Another sound.

Movement.

A branch cracked softly outside the cabin.

Mercer turned immediately toward the window.

Dark pines stood motionless beyond drifting fog.

Nothing visible.

Yet the sheriff felt watched suddenly.

Closely watched.

The tape hissed violently.

Then the voices within the static became clearer.

Dozens layered together.

Crying.

Begging.

Screaming.

Mercer recognized one instantly.

Deputy Wells.

“…Sheriff…”

The blood drained from Mercer’s face.

He lunged toward the tape player immediately.

Eli grabbed his wrist hard enough to stop him.

“Wait.”

The old man’s voice sounded terrified now.

Not of the recording.

Of what came after.

The song ended abruptly.

Click.

Silence flooded the cabin instantly.

Heavy.

Wrong.

Mercer realized his heart pounded hard enough to hurt.

Across the room, hanging bone charms near the window swayed gently despite unmoving air.

Eli stared at the silent tape player without blinking.

Then quietly whispered:

“They sang the opening verses.”

Mercer swallowed slowly.

“What does that mean?”

The medicine man still didn’t answer.

Because somewhere beyond the cabin walls, something massive moved softly between the trees outside.

Part III — Disturbed

Eli Redwater replayed the recording three times.

Each listening disturbed him more visibly.

By the third playback, the old medicine man’s hands shook badly enough that coffee spilled across the wooden table unnoticed.

Mercer watched silently.

The sheriff had expected folklore.

Stories.

Superstitious warnings from an aging tribal elder frightened by local legends.

Instead he watched a man confronting something deeply real.

Something remembered.

The song ended again beneath crackling static.

Eli shut the recorder off immediately this time.

Silence rushed back into the cabin.

Outside, darkness had fully settled across the surrounding forest.

The old man stared into the fire for a long while without speaking.

His face looked pale beneath flickering orange light.

“You know what this is,” Mercer finally said.

Eli nodded once.

“Yes.”

“Then tell me.”

The medicine man slowly reached toward a nearby shelf and removed an old leather-bound journal wrapped carefully in cloth.

The cover bore faded symbols matching those carved near Black Pine Creek.

Mercer noticed several pages inside appeared burned intentionally.

Destroyed.

Eli opened the journal carefully.

Inside rested ancient drawings.

Tall antlered figures.

Bodies hanging from trees.

Humans twisted backward unnaturally beneath black pine forests.

Mercer felt his stomach tighten immediately.

“These are centuries old.”

“Yes.”

“And they describe the same thing happening now?”

Eli looked exhausted.

“They describe what always happens when the song is sung.”

Mercer stared at the drawings.

One image showed entire villages disappearing beneath towering antlers.

Another depicted people walking willingly into dark forests while dead relatives called from trees.

The final illustration stopped Mercer cold.

A massive figure standing between worlds.

Half inside darkness itself.

Its chest filled with screaming faces.

The Hollow One.

“You’ve seen this before,” Mercer whispered.

“No.”

Eli hesitated.

“Not me.”

The old man carefully turned several pages deeper into the journal.

More drawings.

More deaths.

Entire tribal settlements abandoned.

Mass graves.

Binding circles surrounding a towering creature trapped among black stones.

“My grandfather survived the last awakening,” Eli said quietly.

Mercer looked up sharply.

“What?”

“He was a child.”

The medicine man’s voice remained calm.

Too calm.

Like someone discussing inherited trauma repeated across generations.

“He watched villages disappear. Hunters vanish. Families walk into the woods after hearing dead loved ones calling from the trees.”

Mercer felt cold settle inside him again.

“Why was this hidden?”

Eli laughed bitterly.

“Because nobody listens anymore.”

The old man stood slowly and moved toward the window.

Outside, fog drifted heavily between trees surrounding the cabin.

The woods remained completely silent now.

Eli stared outward for several seconds before quietly continuing:

“The guardians kept records for hundreds of years. Every awakening began the same way.”

“The song?”

“Yes.”

Mercer rose slowly.

“What exactly does it do?”

Eli’s expression darkened visibly.

“It wakes him.”

The sheriff swallowed hard.

“Him.”

Eli finally turned back toward him.

And Mercer immediately saw genuine terror there now.

Not hidden anymore.

Not controlled.

Fear.

The medicine man pointed toward the cassette tape.

“That recording is incomplete.”

Mercer frowned.

“Incomplete how?”

“The original song was never meant to summon.”

Eli’s hands trembled again.

“It was meant to imprison.”

The cabin suddenly creaked loudly around them.

Both men froze instinctively.

Heavy footsteps moved softly somewhere beyond the rear wall.

Slow.

Deliberate.

Mercer instinctively reached for his revolver.

Eli grabbed his arm sharply.

“No.”

The old man’s voice dropped almost to a whisper.

“He likes fear.”

The footsteps stopped.

Silence deepened outside.

Then from somewhere beyond the trees came a faint voice using Deputy Wells’ voice perfectly.

“…Sheriff…”

Mercer felt every hair rise instantly along his arms.

Eli closed his eyes painfully.

“He already knows your name now.”

The sheriff stared toward the darkness outside the cabin window.

And for the first time since Noah Pike’s death, Daniel Mercer truly began understanding how hopeless their situation might be.

Part IV — “You Woke Something”

The cabin fire had nearly burned down to embers when Eli Redwater finally spoke the words Mercer would never forget.

“You woke something that was never supposed to return.”

The old medicine man sat motionless beside fading firelight while darkness pressed heavily against the cabin windows.

Outside, the East Texas forest remained silent.

Dead silent.

Mercer slowly lowered his untouched coffee cup.

“You really believe this thing is ancient.”

Eli looked at him tiredly.

“Believe?”

The medicine man gestured toward the tape recorder.

Toward the journal.

Toward the silent woods beyond the cabin.

“Sheriff… belief stopped mattering the moment those children sang that song.”

Mercer wanted to argue.

Wanted rational explanations.

But rational explanations no longer survived contact with reality.

Not after Noah Pike.

Not after Deputy Wells.

Not after hearing dead voices whisper through static.

“What is it?” Mercer finally asked.

Eli stared into the dying fire.

“There are stories older than tribes. Older than names. Stories people buried because remembering them became too dangerous.”

The old man reached toward the leather journal again.

“Our ancestors called it many things.”

He turned pages carefully.

“The Old Hunter.”

Another page.

“The Broken Antler.”

Another.

“He Who Walks Beneath Pines.”

Finally Eli looked directly at Mercer.

“But the oldest name was always forbidden.”

“The Hollow One,” Mercer whispered.

Eli nodded slowly.

“It came from a place between worlds.”

The sheriff frowned.

“What does that mean?”

The medicine man struggled visibly for words.

“The Hollow Place is not hell. Not heaven. Not spirit land.” He shook his head slowly. “It is something underneath all three.”

Wind rattled the cabin softly.

Mercer listened carefully.

“This thing crossed over?”

“Yes.”

“How?”

Eli’s face darkened.

“Long ago, desperate shamans tried opening paths beyond death during famine and disease. They wanted answers from spirits.”

The old man’s voice lowered further.

“Instead they opened something else.”

Mercer remembered the drawings showing villages destroyed beneath towering antlers.

“What happened?”

“The Hollow One came through.”

Silence filled the cabin again.

Then Eli quietly continued:

“It fed.”

The sheriff felt cold settle deeper into his chest.

“Our people fought it for generations. Entire tribes disappeared trying to imprison it.”

Eli pointed toward the symbols surrounding the cabin walls.

“Those are binding marks. Warnings. Pieces of old protections.”

Mercer slowly understood.

“The song…”

“The song was part of the prison.”

Eli’s expression twisted painfully.

“The children only sang fragments. Incomplete verses.”

The old man stared toward the tape recorder with visible hatred.

“They broke the seal without knowing how to close it again.”

Outside, branches cracked softly somewhere close to the cabin.

Mercer instinctively reached for his weapon again.

This time Eli didn’t stop him.

Because both men heard the breathing afterward.

Deep.

Heavy.

Very near.

The Hollow One had followed them here.

Mercer stepped toward the window carefully.

Dark fog drifted between trees beyond the cabin.

Then for one horrifying instant—

Massive antlers appeared briefly among the pines.

Watching.

The figure vanished immediately afterward.

Mercer backed away from the window slowly.

“It’s here.”

Eli nodded once.

“Yes.”

The medicine man stood and moved toward a locked wooden chest beside the fireplace. He opened it carefully.

Inside rested several black stones wrapped in old cloth beside carved knives and weathered tribal relics.

Binding Stones.

Mercer stared at them.

“What are those?”

Eli touched one carefully.

“The only reason humanity survived it before.”

The old man looked older suddenly.

Ancient beneath the firelight.

Burdened by generations of fear.

“There were guardians once,” he whispered. “People sworn to keep the Hollow One imprisoned.”

Mercer understood immediately.

“You’re one of them.”

Eli didn’t answer directly.

Instead he stared toward the dark woods surrounding the cabin.

Listening.

Waiting.

Finally he whispered:

“And now it’s awake again.”

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